sábado, abril 19, 2008

Echoes

She sleeps in dreams
couldn't find the way
she wakes up in tears
can't leave those fears away
she has feelings but won't tell anyone
so restricted, so unfortunate,
She stares through the window
gasping to live another life,
wanting to escape from his mind
to run away, no more wounds
throw all the pain behind.
She talks but no one cares
on her skin, scars from forgetful moments
she has thoughts but won't tell anyone.
I loved her every day while she died every night
now she's gone, finally flew free.
Sometimes I miss her, sometimes I still care about her
sometimes I forget the past, carrying on with my life
loathing this silence, echoes she stole from me.

6 Comentarios:

Blogger José Manuel Salgado dijo...

buena historiaeh, pinta para una rola

abril 19, 2008 3:26 PM  
Blogger Angélika Scully dijo...

Las tres ultimas lineas para el coro, yo digo.

abril 19, 2008 3:33 PM  
Blogger Smells dijo...

Alguien que se chingue la musica

abril 19, 2008 5:54 PM  
Blogger Ljn.- dijo...

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excelente, le pondria yo la musica!
te deje un premio en mi blog!
pasa a buscarlo =)
besotesssss







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abril 20, 2008 11:40 PM  
Blogger faint-> <-min dijo...

excelente poema.. me gustó bastante, en partes me sentí espiada!! saludines!

abril 21, 2008 11:35 AM  
Blogger Smells dijo...

Qué chido que a tanta gente le haya latido, gracias por visitar y comentar!!

mayo 14, 2008 7:07 PM  

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